Slowly our eyes widend with amazement. I didn't know if it was a dream. My goldfish flew across the blackish brown sky. I just stood stood there there knowing not to next. Until a light bulb just popped. I went to get the tallest ladder. After I set up the weatherd down ladder. Right when he was coming I...

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  1. Gill E3 March 2018 at 00:27

    Great beginning, I was not quite sure if you finished your writing...I would like to see your go further in developing a middle and end.

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