Finally, I figured out how to make it rain food. I'm going to tell everyone in town. Also the mayor said I can try it. So I'm going to do it today. I thought there's only a little bit of people in but I was mistaken. It was time. So I tryed it. It was amazing untill the food was going down the drainpipe. It came down the drainpipe and turned into red goo. Good thing it was a dream, or was it.
Finally, I figured out how to make it rain food. I'm going to tell everyone in town. Also the mayor said I can try it. So I'm going to do it today. I thought there's only a little bit of people in but I was mistaken. It was time. So I tryed it. It was amazing untill the food was going down the drainpipe. It came down the drainpipe and turned into red goo. Good thing it was a dream, or was it.
A good idea for your story this week. Now work on polishing up your sentences, making a good choice of strong words and adding some descriptive detail.
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