!00 WC WEEK 14

                                Times Up         
"Class this weeks prompt is a monkey pushing a computer."
"What" everyone gasped.
But right when the teacher said those words my brain was filled with ideas. "So class you have one hour. Your time starts now. I didn't know which idea to choose. It was like I was in a room filled with doors but I didn't know which one to choose. Right when I got an idea the teacher said "your time is up."  

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  1. Unknown14 December 2017 at 17:48

    your title on the 1 for 100 is a ! mark and "so class you have one hour you need another " to end when she is speaking you should to times up to save one word and in "what you should to a ! mark to show that he/she is surprised or worried what I'm saying is so it will show emotion.

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  2. Unknown16 December 2017 at 14:21

    A short story this week. You have more words to use that might help make your story stronger.

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